Wednesday, June 2, 2010

My Blog Through Someone Else's Eyes

I have asked someone else to take a look at my blog in general and tell me what they think of it. One of the first things that caught their attention was my pictures along the right hand side of my blog. They loved looking at them and having a good laugh at them. These are pictures that describe me in many ways, varying from what I collect (M&M's) to my interests such: basketball, soccer, animals, John Deere, and country music. While trying to read some of my post though, they said that the picture where the dog's ears are flapping from the fan's wind, was distracting them. One thing that they told me to improve on my blog is to be more detailed when I write. I am so glad that I asked this person to look at my blog so that I can improve it in the future.

Last Post But Not Least

Through out this whole school year I have been publishing new post, 38 (including this one) to be exact. All of these posts were able to be seen from others who blogger just like myself. Anyone who reads my blog is able to post a comment on any post that they choose. Total I received eight comments on my blog,one of which was my own. On one of the post I received two comments. I am pretty sure that this was because I had a picture that went with it that was attractive to the eye. Everyone of the post that I posted though were just because of they were assigned in class as an assignment. I do not really have a favorite one that I wrote, but if I were to choose it would be the one titled My Town. This would be because I was able to inform people all around the world about where I live. One of my favorite posts in general though was the one where we got to create a glog and added that to out blog. My glog had a background picture that I took in Florida this past summer, and I added other pictures on it that described me. These pictures varied from animals to M&M's. I have also added some things called widgets into my blog. I do not have very many of them, so I defiantly think that I should add more to make my blog even better. Through all of the blogging challenges though, between the ones from my own teacher, and the ones from this blog, I have enjoyed completing them throughout this year and looking back and seeing how much I have changed as a writer a long the way.